Elevator pitch No. 2


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gz8WCWktF_M

This is my elevator pitch and I think I have received beneficial feedback based on previous conversations and interviews. Many people agree with the app I have chosen to create and believe that it could be a good idea. One question that I get asked a lot is how would the police be able to trace back to it and I explained that it would work just like find my friends or other apps to help locate a smart phone.

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  1. Lexington OlsenOctober 27, 2019 at 8:33 PM

    Hey Jordyn,
    I really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch and reading about the feedback that you received. I really like your idea about creating this app and think that it can help prevent dangerous things from happening to people and make people feel safe. You did a good job at speaking clearly and staying on topic throughout your entire pitch. You also did a great job at explaining why you think this app would be beneficial and helpful. Overall, you did an awesome job creating your elevator pitch.

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  2. Robert MartinOctober 28, 2019 at 7:52 AM

    Hey Jordyn! Great job with this elevator pitch! Also great job with going over previous feedback. Your elevator pitch was really well done. You spoke clearly and confidently and sounded very knowledgeable. You seemed to really know what you were talking about and that gives buyers confidence. You did a really good job, keep up the great work and have a great rest of the semester!

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  3. Brandon McKayOctober 28, 2019 at 8:08 AM

    Hello Jordyn, great idea again, I think the elevator pitch here could do just a few more things to really make your product shine. You could do some choreographed movement, like when you switching from talking about what your product is to what it does, and you could change your inflection pattern, like maybe lower your volume when talking about the sensitive parts of this issue. I hope this helps!

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  4. Christina RichardsonOctober 28, 2019 at 9:18 AM

    Hey Jordyn,
    I think that this is a really great idea and that I can see how much you have progressed throughout this process. I think that this pitched seemed much more prepared and confident than the first Elevator Pitch. I am excited to see how much further you take this idea. Overall, great job!

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